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Breathing Her Last
Contributed by
x-whoever-carez-x
on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 01:55:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dark red rose
Falling down to the ground
No-one to hold her
People surround her
Watching and waiting
She cries silent tears
They press down upon her
Till she can’t see the light
Nothing to guide her
Her world full of nothing
She’s not pleased with this life
We all can tell
But nobody does anything
Not even the boy
That knows what’s happening
She creeps off silently
Tightens the rope
And breathes her last breath
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x-whoever-carez-x
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2006-10-09 01:55:43]
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Re: Breathing Her Last
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by Oneir8dude on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:24:53 AM AEST
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Don't do it Rose....
You're right quite depressing but, very beautiful at
the same time...
Suicide is sad... People feeling there is no hope or last recourse...
When all it does is hurt the ones they hold in their Heart...
Thank You for sharing
Bill |
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Re: Breathing Her Last
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by EddieDean on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:41:11 AM AEST
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Very deep poem, its hard to keep going when your world is falling down around you. But, you have to keep fighting, keep living and you will be okay. Suicide is a permanent solution to a temporary problem, and all you do is hurt the ones who love you.
Keep your head up, its hard, I know first-hand, but you can do it.
Eddie Dean |
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Re: Breathing Her Last
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by crazy on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 01:29:48 PM AEST
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has such a horrific meaning that you just get lost in the emotion.im not going to judge you for your writing cause ppl did that to me,but i know that no matter how much you want to its not worth it.i should take my own advice sometimes.if i could i would do it no questions asked but the one thing that keeps me from doing it,is knowing how happy peopel that hate me would be so i make them suffer the short time i can with my presence.
kick ass poem |
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Re: Breathing Her Last
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:22:15 PM AEST
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it is a beautiful and depressing poem, but i'm not gonna tell you what to do, since i don't want to sound like a hypocrite. but like crazy said, and my friend always says, as much as she's like to do it, she'd rather live to keep ***** off the people she doesn't like. sounds fun enough right. ahem. anyway, good write.
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Re: Breathing Her Last
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by strawberryshortcake on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 02:13:13 PM AEST
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| don't do it;PLEASE??? you write so well. you have definitely been to the edge but stay with us because you are not alone. the others are right you know it is more fun to stay here and get back in the face of the ones who dis us and make our lives a nightmare. all the same, we can't be the ones to decide when its over because we aren't the ones who created it to begin with. you are very talented. would like to read more of your work. |
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