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The One I Can Never Hold.
Contributed by
alison
on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 09:12:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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To much to say and no words to use,
When I see your face I must be seeing a masterpiece,
When I feel your touch I must be in heaven,
When I hear your voice I must be hearing the angels sing,
To much to do and no time for it,
When I’m in your arms nothing can harm me,
When I’m in your eyes nothing else exists,
When I’m in your words nothing breathes,
Its more than a feeling this time,
Its more than a hope this time,
Its more than a need this times,
Its more than a desire this time,
Its more then a choice this time,
To much in the way and no healing,
When I know you’re near I can’t hear myself think,
When I know you smile I can’t see the darkness,
When I know you feel pain I can’t feel my own,
To much to know with no answers,
When I’m in a room with you nothing can bother me,
When I’m seeing your smile the air stands still,
When I’m touching your hand all I feel is your heart beating,
Its more than a idea in my head this time,
Its more than a bright illusion this time,
Its more than a want for curing this time,
Its more than a search for meaning this time,
Its more than a freedom from the chains this time,
But then the alarm sounds,
But then red lights are blinking,
But then I awake,
But then the tears begin to fall,
But then it was only a dream…..
But then I must get out of bed,
But then I must walk the halls alone,
But then I must eat by myself,
But then I must wait longer,
But then I must sleep colder then ice,
But then you are the one I belong to,
But then you are my other half,
But then you are the one like never before,
But then you are the one in my heart only,
But then you are the one I can never hold….
Copyright ©
alison
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2006-10-08 21:12:37]
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Re: The One I Can Never Hold.
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by one-curly-fry on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:15:16 PM AEST
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very nice / sad write. I can relate to the second to last stanza the most - I hate that form of loneliness. I hate the big empty bed...
You said in a comment on one of my pieces that you hate daydreams - how about the ones at night that leave you feeling like this?
But no fear, life will get better - just need to watch the sunrise to know it's always starting over - we just need to have the confidence to take what's ours!
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Re: The One I Can Never Hold.
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by whiteleo1984 on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 12:48:51 AM AEST
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| very sad write, i feel ur pain n this one... wish it wouldn't b like this but u will make it |
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Re: The One I Can Never Hold.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 03:07:34 PM AEST
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OMG soo sad!!
it reminds me of...well....me...
i like a guy...he has a gf...he is with me in my heart only but i feel liek that bout him...
i love it! it sounds liek a song..you should add music! |
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