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Forget
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man_On_High
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Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 08:58:09 PM in AEST
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Re: Forget
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 11:01:44 PM AEST
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| This is brilliant, a marvelous write. The imagery, the wording, the rhythm, just a perfect piece. |
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Re: Forget
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:13:04 AM AEST
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It is a very beautiful write.
And if thou must weep,
let go the thoughts
that bind thee to thy grief..
lie still and watch the angels reap
the golden harvest of thy sorrow,
sheaf by sheaf
I love this part.
love and hugs
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Re: Forget
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 01:04:54 PM AEST
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I must agree this is a truly beautiful write. My favourite lines are these:.
And if thou must weep,
let go the thoughts
that bind thee to thy grief..
lie still and watch the angels reap
the golden harvest of thy sorrow,
sheaf by sheaf
This is something I can really relate too. I held my grief for a long time, maybe I was just being stubborn, or maybe I was scared I would forget the person I grieved for. Your words speak volumes, and I can sense the emotion very well. Enjoyed it very much. Sue x |
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Re: Forget
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by shelby on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 05:28:38 PM AEST
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Brilliant Billy!
There isn't a part I chose the best its all wrapped up neatly within my heart.
We all hold onto something a little longer than planned I think but then we let it go and let it be.
Nicely done as always my friend.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Forget
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 07:52:40 PM AEST
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My angel, I have read this over and over and each time, find
my breath stolen. This is completely enchanting, sweets. I, as
others, am drawn especially to that last stanza. It's incredibly
captivating .. and written with such an ingenious flair that I find
myself lost absolutely and fully within the words.
To find ourselves in restful slumber and letting go of all the
sorrows that have long harboured within, is a delightful and
dreamy notion, babe. And one that, I believe, can be even
further advanced by a love held in our deepest of hearts.
entirely stunning, love
yours forevermore ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Forget
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 9th October 2006 @ 11:04:46 PM AEST
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Dearest friend~
I, like the other commentors love the stanza that's been pointed out. We do tend to hold on to our grief alot longer than we should.
As always your work is never disappointing. I am always inspired to write after reading your magnificient work. I love the way you are able to pen down your deepest emotions.
An excellent post Billy~ Keep up the remarkable work.
love always ur fan/friend,
Dreamer~ |
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Re: Forget
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 10th October 2006 @ 05:19:45 PM AEST
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Although a depressive affect was prevalent, your words bring much more to the table.
This was great touch:
“like a weary child
that loves to keep
locked in its arms some treasure”
I ask you this, when you finally sleep…do you really forget?
Amazing work
As always
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Re: Forget
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 10:54:34 PM AEST
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I love this piece as it speaks of letting go of pain and if one is to ever be nourished in this life forgiveness, understanding and love (to our greatest pain) is the way we are set free.
A wise and wonderful piece that I hope guides many. |
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Re: Forget
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by needledancing on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 12:20:53 PM AEST
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| Another emotional process of letting go..difficult until one aches all over from the grasping of the ropes tied about our heart. Then tired of our pain...finally shed the ropes.Well done friend. |
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Re: Forget
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 05:26:27 AM AEST
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Kudos this I cannot prove is fraud. But it probably is. I will find the truth to this one someday.
YOU ARE A FRAUD! |
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Re: Forget
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd July 2007 @ 07:25:29 AM AEST
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Well this is an update sorry Charlie but this too is a plagiarized post. Oh Billy you FRAUD!!!!
Henry Van Dyke's : Sleep Song [infomotions.com] |
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