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he's dreaming through my feelings.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 01:05:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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his words echo like screams,
dreaming through my feelings.
i feel like crying now.
but will i be able to stop him screaming?
rested inside chaotic walls,
some how i feel him lying next to me.
but there's no one else here,
yet i know he is here with me.
the fear bubbles through my meaning,
it's pushing me to the ground.
how much longer will i hear him screaming,
when he's no where to be found?
why is he so upset around me,
and so happy when others are there.
what have i done to curse his joy?
is it because he cares???
i see him every wednesday,
but when he doesn't see me i know that he's still there.
why does he eat my feelings?
and suffocate my air?
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Re: he's dreaming through my feelings.
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by crazy on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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thats crazy awsome (literally)
wicked write |
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Re: he's dreaming through my feelings.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 01:58:10 PM AEST
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| I am struck by the this poems ability to express diffrent personas. It seems like you are writing about a person....and yet....it seems you are writing of Loneliness..... |
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Re: he's dreaming through my feelings.
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 6th November 2006 @ 12:31:20 PM AEST
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This was brillant... I liked this a lot..
Take care
Christina |
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