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the pain of freedom
Contributed by
viola
on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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What have I done.
What did I say.
Did I really
let you get away.
I'm dying here.
I'm in so much pain.
Why didn't I just
get to complain.
Well, that's right
it's because I love you,
because you set them free,
that's what you do.
No more fighting
for everything you want.
Let nature run it's course.
You're doomed if you don't,
yet you're so pained
if you do.
I guess I should know,
I've lost my heart in you.
Copyright ©
viola
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2003-02-15 11:00:00]
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Re: the pain of freedom
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:01:11 PM AEST
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| i love this... feelings so deep and vivid... |
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Re: the pain of freedom
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 11:00:21 PM AEST
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You have such a talent for expressing pain. I'm not sure that's really a good thing, but...lol. I agree, though, with what you said. :)
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