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Him
Contributed by
heba48
on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 05:56:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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He's so important
in my life
He's dearer
than my children
He's nearer
than my wife
He's above all
he's at the top
God protect him
God bless him
my laptop
Copyright ©
heba48
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2006-10-06 05:56:54]
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Re: Him
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by strawberryshortcake on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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| very humorous. so true too sadly enough. |
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Re: Him
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 06:52:19 AM AEST
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Sarcastically funny I say. Nice job.
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Re: Him
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by onlyoneheart on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 07:02:40 AM AEST
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| yeah it's nice |
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Re: Him
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by Muhammadshanazar on
Saturday, 6th January 2007 @ 08:54:14 PM AEST
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full of suspence, a nice write.
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Re: Him
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 11:59:31 AM AEST
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Oh my....this gave me such a chuckle. Isn't that the truth...I'm 42 and have had a computer now for a few years. I wonder how I managed before (and feel guilty being so darn dependent on it) I so didn't expect the outcome of this poem. Hee Hee Great stuff.
Peace,
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Re: Him
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 03:03:56 PM AEST
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| Heh, very true (sadly!) Nice write - Drapes |
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