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Thinking
Contributed by
Kimberlynn
on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 05:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I've been thinking a lot lately
It's like...I'm not in control anymore
It's like I've been left in the dark
Is this real?
Is anything real?
I can't feel it in my heart
Did I loose it?
Did I ever have it?
It's just a origin
You can't actually feel these things
It's all in your head
...Right?
Then...why do I feel them IN my heart
Maybe...when I became a true christian
God created my heart
Maybe he made it real
So maybe...maybe my heart CAN feel these things
Maybe we're alive
Copyright ©
Kimberlynn
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2006-10-05 17:57:01]
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Re: Thinking
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by emystar on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 11:21:55 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Thinking
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 3rd April 2007 @ 03:59:03 AM AEST
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Interesting. This was very creative and good.
Great poem.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Thinking
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by manbeast on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 04:25:52 AM AEST
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I feel hope here
that's a good thing
left me wanting to know more
that's good also |
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