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Someone I Never Knew
Contributed by
gabby521
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Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 04:01:26 PM in AEST
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So I'm wond'ring now what it will take
For you to notice me
Do I need to cry and let you know
Of hidden spite or jealousy?
I don't know what more to tell you
Without crossing that vanishing line
Between what it is that should be said
and what's better left to time
you know that I love you
no matter what you do
you no that I'll defend you
no matter what the mistake
and you know that I'll forgive you
no matter how it hurts
And I'll not give up on you, on us
No matter how long it takes
I want to be that someone again
The reason you are here
The one to put a smile on your face
I want that time alone with you that fills me with a quiet fear
A fear for knowing that it's wrong
And you're no longer you
And "you" is someone I'm not sure
I ever really knew
But you know that I love you
No matter what you do
And you know that I'll defend you
No matter what the mistake
You know that I'll forgive you
Despite how it hurts, oh how it hurts
But I'll not give up on you, on us, on everything
And I don't care how long it takes
And I try my hardest not to cry
For fear that tears will say that I
Am nothing more than what you wanted me to be
And I hate to say it hurts so bad
'Cause I try so hard not to show it and
Still I know it gets harder everyday for me
But somehow I'll still love you
No matter what you do
And please don't use that even more
To break my heart in two
You know that you're forgiven
But I'm the one that's hurt
Do I give up now on you, on us
For what I know will never work?
I look into your eyes and see
The part of me defined by you
But "you" is someone I'm not sure
I ever really knew
Copyright ©
gabby521
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2006-10-05 16:01:26]
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 04:37:39 PM AEST
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| "The part of me defined by you"...good line. |
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 05:06:26 PM AEST
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Ooo... i like this. Great write, but it's sad... very emotional... i like it. all i can say, is do what you think would be best. follow the heart and don't let this person hurt you too much. great write, tho, keep up the good work!
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by Kimberlynn on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 06:01:29 PM AEST
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| This is an awsome song! It's real and true and emorional, I loved it. |
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by secretwind on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 06:58:13 PM AEST
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To cross or not to cross
that ol vanishing line...
well done. |
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by Undiscovered_Diamond on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 07:53:25 PM AEST
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| Oh..My..God..Are you me?! I know exactly where you're coming from and relived every emotion with the poem from my heart. An amazing poem. You should be every proud xXx |
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Re: Someone I Never Knew
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 22nd October 2006 @ 07:26:28 PM AEST
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Powerful ending in particular, though I felt that the chorus was a bit too long.
Maybe I'm just used to the chorus being shorter than the verses.
Thanks for sharing, nonetheless.
*hugglies*
Kat.
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