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That Girl Beside You
Contributed by
lilbabe
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Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:19:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Her heart is broken
Like her smile
You pass her everyday
In the hall
Or maybe she sits beside you in science class
She doesn't talk much,
But inside she really tries
To make you notice
That she's even alive
You never give her a chance
So then one day
That girl's not at school
You think nothing of it
Till you hear the news
A girl so young, so lonely
Took her own life
Then it hits you
"That girl" is gone
You can't forget
That sullen look in her eyes
You never noticed till she was gone
Too late now
Copyright ©
lilbabe
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2006-10-04 21:19:08]
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Re: That Girl Beside You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:21:33 PM AEST
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sad poem
great emotions and feelings
put into this poem
great job keep on writing
i will be reading |
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Re: That Girl Beside You
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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| this is sooo true..we should notice more and try to show concern |
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Re: That Girl Beside You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:51:20 PM AEST
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True and wise u r,
Sad but very menaingfull write.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: That Girl Beside You
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by sohangme on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 12:34:04 AM AEST
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Good write! Keep up the great job!
Nicole Alexander |
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Re: That Girl Beside You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 05:50:47 AM AEST
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Death is a subject I know loads about as most of the people I love have died. I can feel their pain all the time in my heart and I think of them up in heaven in a good place while I am on this good for nothing earth with a race which is hell bent on destruction.
Gazzavision1xxRIP |
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