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Empty
Contributed by
Karlee14
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:00:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Words were said
From you to me
Screaming in my head
I'm empty.
Secrets revealed
Rules no longer to abide
Lips unsealed
Nothing's left inside.
Ardency misrules
A price I have to pay
A game for fools
In my mind it stays.
What's left to feel
An emotionless fight
Pain too real
Freeze at the sight.
Chaos to smite
Pathways aren't clear
Lights, not as bright
Faith to smear.
Words were spoken
From you to me
Now, heart broken
Alone and empty.
Copyright ©
Karlee14
... [
2006-10-04 21:00:38]
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:17:36 PM AEST
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The poem is full af deep emotions
and meaning great job
I hope one day you feel as full as your poetry
style
keep on writing i will be reading |
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Re: Empty
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by sohangme on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 12:38:13 AM AEST
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Good job...keep it up.
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Re: Empty
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by sprinter27 on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 05:12:40 PM AEST
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excellent write! the rhyme is great, flowed right through to the end. i really like this write and lets just hope you don't feel to alone and empty and if you do, hopefully it will go away as mine emptiness and lonliness did... keep up the great work!
~sprints |
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Re: Empty
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by babylugz on
Friday, 6th October 2006 @ 01:30:27 AM AEST
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| Wow I really like it. I love the way you made it flow. And if this poem is true and you really feel empty I hope that the emptiness will be filled with happiness very soon. Take care |
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