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You
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 07:50:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I don't
wanna
be
with out you,
no I don't
wanna
exsist
with out you.
I wanna be with you
love is due....
all I need
is
you
and your love love love.
I feel love
ooh
I want love,
I
think that
you
are the one.
On and on
the sensations keep me spinning
got me giggling and grinning
thinking that I'm beginning
to fall in love
with you.
The world keeps on turning
everyday I'm learning
that all my searching and yearning
goes round and round
and back to
you.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-10-04 19:50:18]
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Re: You
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 08:23:31 PM AEST
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Don't know 'bout anyone else but it's melting, jus simply breathe taking. blubbbb, blub, I helpless to your words.
big smile, huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: You
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by Amicus on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 08:33:50 PM AEST
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Nice but could use a little work
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Re: You
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 07:41:06 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful love piece...Very nice...
honey56 |
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Re: You
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 09:27:22 PM AEST
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what an urgent tempo..
and very heartfelt sentiments as well my friend~
final stanza..lines 7 & 8
very nice..
Good work-
B |
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