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THE KEEPER OF YOUR KEY!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Who my love would you say,
Is the keeper of the key,
That unlocks your hearts door?
I know now it’s not me.
Who is the one you’d run to,
When love is what you need?
And when you’re troubled, feeling low,
To whose words would you give heed?
Who is the one you think of,
When you turn your lights to dim?
I wonder who that man is,
For I know I am not him!
Who holds the key, I wish was me?
And why have you told me not?
Am I locked out forever,
As the man who you’ve forgot?
Your silence speaks in deafening tones,
Like the roar of a raging sea.
As I sink for the third time tell me,
Who is the keeper of your key?
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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Re: THE KEEPER OF YOUR KEY!
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by Heavenangel on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:00:57 AM AEST
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| great peice,i hope you find the holder of your key! ~heaven angel~ |
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Re: THE KEEPER OF YOUR KEY!
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:40:02 AM AEST
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loved this poem
well done
poigant and effective
peace be your journey
Terry
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Re: THE KEEPER OF YOUR KEY!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:40:09 AM AEST
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| wonderful write, Robert, |
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Re: THE KEEPER OF YOUR KEY!
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:35:41 PM AEST
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| this is a beautifully sad poem... excellent form... |
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