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it lies with fate.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:51:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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numbness holds my emotion,
as i look at what i see.
the alcoholics in the corners,
the dirty men that want to rape me.
her junky bf in the bedroom.
the abusive little kids going round.
the screams echoing across the ceiling
and the fights that anger pounds.
the suicide attempts from my friends,
the temptation to just give in.
the people telling me to slit my throat,
and the scars engraved on my skin.
how did things get so out of hand?
how have they reached this unbearable state.
i don't no how much longer i can live like this,
my desision, it lies with fate.
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deathdrop
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2006-10-04 15:51:37]
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Re: it lies with fate.
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by Somnium on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 04:20:21 PM AEST
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A very honest and sobering piece that drew me in
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Re: it lies with fate.
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by dinolove on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 08:42:04 PM AEST
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| this seems like it was painful to get out, i hope you're ok. |
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Re: it lies with fate.
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by tearstained_soul on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 10:23:13 PM AEST
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| wow, this one struck home, probably b/c i can relate to it.. well, to an exteant... but the general feeling of the poem kinda feels likw it poped outta my mind *giggles akwardly* have a nice one hun, i hope all is well. |
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