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Crimson death
Contributed by
Felony
on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 10:15:33 AM in AEST
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The pain in my heart into my soul
Into my being drills a hole
Like a pike shoved through my chest
To stay alive I do my best
As crimson blood splatters on the ground
Untill my death I won't make a sound
Looking into the eyes of my enemy
For what seems like an eternity
He smiles back knowing I'm about to die
He sees the dark tears that I cry
Just to see him in my very pescence
Seems to weaken my very essence
My last breath comes and goes
As my heart already slows
There is nothing that I can say or do
Just tell him that I hate you
I guess in life we all have fate
To save me it will be too late
Copyright ©
Felony
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2006-10-04 10:15:33]
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Re: Crimson death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:03:32 PM AEST
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very deep poem
I really liked this poem alot
great ryhming and excellent flow of words
keep writing and i will be reading |
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Re: Crimson death
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:04:42 PM AEST
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p.s im glad to say welcome to Y.P.D.C
and im glad to have left you your first and second comments lol
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Re: Crimson death
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:15:47 PM AEST
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| good deep poem i like a lot thanks 4 sharing |
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Re: Crimson death
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by secretwind on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 06:34:30 PM AEST
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I like it
eerie and kinda dark flow |
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