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SHOT DEAD 101
Contributed by
poewhit
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Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 03:03:21 PM in AEST
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Near the days study hour.
Funny now a casket flower.
It all happen so fast.
Said,"the images made him do it".
The gun was his masculinity.
Had to get even ,of a mind thought.
Drugs,T.V. IMAGES of game toys.
Had to try it for real.
Living on a drug cloud.
Said,"they talked too loud".
Didnt like the color of real blood.
Wept like a new born baby- after.
"MoM will be made", he said.
Police took him away head down.
Said, "I'M not your play clown toy".
Had to prove he was not a boy.
LIFE--The end of the story.
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poewhit
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2006-10-03 15:03:21]
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Re: SHOT DEAD 101
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:15:23 AM AEST
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Such a tradegy in a small close knit community. It saddens my heart to read headlines like this when innocent lives are taken. A well written poem thanks for sharing it~
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: SHOT DEAD 101
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:55:28 PM AEST
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| too real too close to the heart. good strong writing ability.sad really that the world has come to this. |
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Re: SHOT DEAD 101
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 07:02:27 PM AEST
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reality t.v. reality games.. and people say it isn't harmful.
I for one think it is..some kids can't tell fantasy from reality. |
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