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Luxuria
Contributed by
keilantra
on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 02:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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And he watched her with hungry eyes over the table,
paying attention to everytime she would lean over
and how the light hit her in the perfect places-
was she what they call a tease?
Two days and a night out on the town later
and he'd waited too long.
Her shoes hit the stone floor with loud click -click -clicks;
her giggles echoed off dark walls and made him come alive.
Against the wall, her rouge came off on his lips
and inside she left her coat on the floor.
He said, "I'll make you mine."
but she said he'd never conquer her.
It was such.a.lie.
His hands wandered and it didn't matter that she said 'no'
because words are just words and
they don't mean anything
to people you don't know.
He admired the way her hair fell over her eyes when she cried
and told her she was breath-taking
She said she didn't want it
but he never hear it through roar of adrenaline in his ears.
He kissed the corners of her lips into a smile.
She left and he scratched another line into the table with a smile.
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Re: Luxuria
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 08:15:56 PM AEST
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ahem
well, my dear kei .... holy crap!!!!
A very well executed write, my friend. What an
imagination you have ..
This teasing write evokes strange wonder and
fascination. Excellent job, hun. Your diversity is showing ~
~Breezy |
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Re: Luxuria
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 08:36:53 PM AEST
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Wow Kei~
you are a very talented and gifted poetess who pens down brilliant poetry for us to indulge in. Your work is taking new heights now my friend. Keep up the excellent work~
hugs from a fan,
Sue M |
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Re: Luxuria
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 12:53:24 PM AEST
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| wow! this is truly amazing. i could see the lines taking place right in front of me. very gifted writer you are. |
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