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The Path
Contributed by
faith_my_eyes
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Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 01:36:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Such a long stretch...
This stony road...
Where it goes...
Remains untold...
I commence to walk
It's stony ground…
I follow its direction...
Around and round...
It's curves are sharp..
I'm unaware of the next bend...
But upon reflection I find...
Though distance doth part us,
There your shadow lurks…
With each slope and incline
And each way this path may jerk...
One single question lays on my mind...
Will you be my path's end?
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Re: The Path
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by alasdaircairns on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 01:52:43 PM AEST
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| Ahhh that's sweet. Speculation and hope mingled together like two cosy lovers. Nice piece. |
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Re: The Path
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by strawberryshortcake on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 02:10:39 PM AEST
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| interesting. like the flow of the piece. lets see where this goes next. you are very good. |
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Re: The Path
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 06:26:45 PM AEST
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Andrew who? *stares widely* I am so behind. Great write.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: The Path
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 07:00:56 AM AEST
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A most interesting and well written poem. I love the structure and the flow is great. I hope the path that is chosen is the right path for you. The best of luck to you~ A top write. Well done.
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: The Path
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 21st October 2006 @ 11:07:04 PM AEST
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Woah, such a thought-provoking write.
I love the flow in this, it's kinda lulling...
Or that might just be because I'm sleepy; but heh.
I think my favourite line would have to be the first,
because it kinda accepts how long the journey actually is.
And I think an important part of everything is just .. to accept.
Thankies for sharing this.
*hugglies you*
Kat.
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