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Eyes sleep death
Contributed by
somnium
on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:14:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Eyes droop down
Send grey dust
Along the misty
View of your Eyes
Sleep it comes
And tells you
Not to stay in
This world but to Sleep
Death it wraps
Its soft arms around you
And closes in as you
Face your own Death
Copyright ©
somnium
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2006-10-03 09:14:48]
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Re: Eyes sleep death
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by flamingblade on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:48:35 AM AEST
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it's dark
short but to the point
i like it
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Re: Eyes sleep death
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 10:02:23 AM AEST
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nice little poem
short and to the point great job
keep writing and i will be reading |
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Re: Eyes sleep death
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 12:14:58 PM AEST
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This is dark and spooky. Nicely done.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Eyes sleep death
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 08:04:03 PM AEST
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Very dark. I often feel like this
myself. Especially recently.
I love it.
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