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Pure Intents and Purer Soul
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Pure intents and purer soul,
Unmarked conscience and freeform mold,
One plate shifts while the other holds,
A second's friction makes a decade's hole.
What once was innocent
Hardens in premature form.
In the dawn of bitterness,
The child goes to war.
The hatred of hate
Recognizes its hypocrisy far too late.
Evening falls as the child waits,
The souls will collide in common traits.
Hatred cuts the earth a canal,
Evil trickles through with its poison.
As the child steps to cross,
The river widens.
At last the child succeeds,
With only a fractured mind and scraped knees.
What awaits them again is the power of Hatred,
Of which the child does not fear.
They draw their swords
As their ultimate fate draws near.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2006-10-02 23:46:20]
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Re: Pure Intents and Purer Soul
(User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 12:11:42 AM AEST
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You have written this with such power and meaning.
“Hatred cuts the earth a canal,
Evil trickles through with its poison.”
That says a lot about today’s society.
May peace and joy fill your heart.
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Re: Pure Intents and Purer Soul
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 07:21:27 PM AEST
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A thought provoking and powerful write you have penned here. So much truth throughout the lines of your poem. Sadly that's today's society for you. You have done a fine job with this write. Well done and thanx so much for posting it~
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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