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The echoes of my memories
Contributed by
goodandevil
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:23:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The echoes of my memories
That haunt my dreamless sleep
Burrowing deep inside
Unmercifully they creep
Traveling through my body
Their venom quickly seeps
These undetected echoes
Still cause my heart to weep
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2006-10-02 23:23:23]
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Re: The echoes of my memories
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:25:34 PM AEST
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great poem so much expressed in such a small amount of words
very nicely done bravo to you
keep on writing i will be reading |
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Re: The echoes of my memories
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 01:02:25 AM AEST
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You can feel the sadness in this write as you read.
” Burrowing deep inside
Unmercifully they creep”
Yes, memories tend to do this to us when we have really bad ones.
My you find peace and joy in your heart one day.
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Re: The echoes of my memories
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 06:21:35 AM AEST
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| meaningful, touching, short, simple...perfect |
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Re: The echoes of my memories
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 11:19:57 AM AEST
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| loved the rhyme and how you kept the flow..dreamless sleep is the pitts. |
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Re: The echoes of my memories
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 04:26:31 PM AEST
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Through so little words you have managed to pen so much. Haunting memories tend to haunt our dreamless sleep. An excellent post. May your mind and heart be filled with much happier thoughts my friend.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M
PS thank you so much for the comment on my poem. Very much appreciated :-) |
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