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Stand on My Shoulders
Contributed by
Jilly
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Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Stand on my shoulders
If the waters get to deep
Stand on my shoulders
If the mountain gets to steep
I’ll be your shoulder
If you need to cry
I’ll be your shoulder
To lift you up on high
Stand on my shoulders
If you can’t see the road
Stand on my shoulders
I’ll help carry your load
I’ll be your shoulder
When you are in despair
I’ll be your shoulder
To show you I care
I’ll be there for you
To help make you bolder
But imagine what we could do
If we stood shoulder to shoulder…
Copyright ©
Jilly
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2003-02-15 01:40:00]
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by viola on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 01:55:30 AM AEST
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| you cant beat a great friendship.this is great. |
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 10:24:33 PM AEST
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Aw that's so sweet! Looks like you have a real, true friendship. Great write!
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 10:14:14 PM AEST
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great friendship poem...lovely write...i have some friends i feel that way about.
Sharon |
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by Lubnaan on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:38:52 PM AEST
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| i never liked inspirational poetry that much but i like the flow in this poem |
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by Backblade on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:52:40 AM AEST
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Jill
I liked the pace of the poem. The end rhymes kept the pace consistent and flowing...which is incorporated into a good friendship.
As I read this poem, i leaned back in my chair and what i saw was the shape of an old style lantern which was used to lead one through the darkness. I see that in this poem...friends helping one another throughout life to achieve their goals and accomplish their dreams.
Great work! |
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Re: Stand on My Shoulders
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 4th May 2003 @ 03:12:33 PM AEST
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| Nice one Jilly, typical of you. |
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