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Prohibited to Care
Contributed by
MarcRob
on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:28:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I know the blackness
I know it well
I know the darkness
It is my friend
To shine a light
Will cast a shadow
This shadow is doubt
I don't want to know
Are you not worth it?
Would it be a crime?
Are you going to see me?
Is there some time?
Can I cradle you?
Or is that forbidden
Can I hold you
And be forgiven?
Are you scared
Of what might be?
Are you ashamed
Of what you see?
I tell you the truth
Do you not believe?
I do this for you
And not for me
Tell me boy
Of what you know
Of what they told you
Am I friend or Foe?
Copyright ©
MarcRob
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2006-10-02 19:28:11]
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Re: Prohibited to Care
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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good poem i liked it
so i see you as a friend not a foe
you kept with the flow
keep on writing i will read more
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Re: Prohibited to Care
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:04:41 PM AEST
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| a shadow of a doubt huh? liked the poem. |
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Re: Prohibited to Care
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by goodandevil on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:57:18 PM AEST
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| good rhyming keep it up!! |
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Re: Prohibited to Care
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 10:00:41 AM AEST
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shadow of doubt?
very nice indeed.
you did a great job on this one |
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