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The lady of the lake
Contributed by
topcatcrowther
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:27:21 PM in AEST
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Lady of the lake,
I see you in the waters,
Mist shrouds your beauty splendour,
Evening sun pierces the trees,
I see you Glide to the water edge,
Beauty exquisite,
Your threadlike garments drape around you,
Posture perfect,
No ripple disturbs,
Mysterious lady,
Graceful ballerina of the woods,
No bird is heard,
No creature stirs,
For nothing could disturb such enchanting magnificence,
She comes to immerse me in her lagoon,
Her eyes draw me in,
As if a noose is set around my neck,
Pulls me in,
Into her magical spell,
White witch of the waters,
I am yours.
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Re: The lady of the lake
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by catz77 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:33:00 PM AEST
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good imagery
i could really picture the still water and her pulling
you in..
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Re: The lady of the lake
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:35:01 PM AEST
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| Great description here, nice write. |
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Re: The lady of the lake
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 08:02:10 PM AEST
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nice display of wording and well written too
i really liked this poem you have talent so keep on using it
and i will be reading |
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