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The only
Contributed by
JoeyTrib1550
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You’re the best that’s ever happened to me.
You’re so incredibly sweet and so unbearable beautiful.
I fall in love with you all over again every day, every time I see you,
Every time I close my eyes and you’re still there.
I can’t stop thinking about you,
My imagination pictures you,
My soul wants to be with you,
My heart screams your name.
Every time I think about you, the sun shines brightly
And I wonder how it can ever grow dark.
Though when I look in the sky, at the stars,
All trouble seems so far away,
Because I know you’re under the same sky,
Maybe even looking at the same stars,
And the distance between us just disappears and time fades out.
So I stand under the star filled sky,
Wishing nothing more but to be with you,
Watching the dawn with you
And to tell you how much I love you.
You’re the one,
The only.
Copyright ©
JoeyTrib1550
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2006-10-02 15:12:10]
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Re: The only
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by ham323 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:37:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
It's rare to find a love like this.
You're a different kind of lucky.
Wonderful poem.
You're good, keep writing.
-Ham |
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Re: The only
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 08:06:34 PM AEST
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A most beautiful poem filled with loving thoughts. May distance never stand in the way of true love. Wishing you all the best. A wonderful poem thanks for sharing it~
warm hugs,
Sue M |
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Re: The only
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 04:30:26 AM AEST
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this person is very lucky!
great write! its beautiful.
the only thing is, I think it would make it flow better if you "pressed enter" more often... er w/e I dunno how ta say it.
the words are perfect though!
luvs ya!
.~*Jess*~. |
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Re: The only
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 12:50:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful.. This poem was very beautiful.. I really liked it a lot... I liked how you wrote this and it was a great poem...
Take care
Christina |
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Re: The only
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by babylugz on
Saturday, 30th December 2006 @ 08:16:55 PM AEST
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| You are so talented with your words. She is a very lucky lady. |
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Re: The only
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st February 2007 @ 07:35:48 AM AEST
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| its so heartfelt. genuine. i love this poem |
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