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Anywhere
Contributed by
annoiosa
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 01:59:28 PM in AEST
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I wish I was somewhere way different
Somewhere beautiful and happy, you see.
I wish I was somewhere warm, with blue skies
With oceans as far as my eyes can see.
I wish I was on the beaches of Hawaii
Or in the Tuscan hills of Italy.
I wish I was on Mount Madalena
Living life so peacefully.
I wish I could walk through Napa Valley
Or the see the whales in Cape Cod
I wish I could swim at Lazaretto
Or watch birds in Taiwan.
I just wish I could leave everything
And go without a care or a fear
I would go everywhere and anywhere
Anywhere but here.
Copyright ©
annoiosa
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2006-10-02 13:59:28]
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Re: Anywhere
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 02:11:53 PM AEST
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| awwwww... I''m sorry. good write though..close your eyes and dream of those far away places..:) |
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Re: Anywhere
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by lord_sogi on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 02:33:26 PM AEST
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| I sometimes wish I was on a different planet, but yeah it is a good poem, capture the feeling of wanting to leave everything behind. Sometimes just the thought of being somewhere else is comforting. |
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Re: Anywhere
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:49:38 PM AEST
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Great Idea for a poem, with listing all these beautiful places
Some parts aren't quite perfect, wether due to rithm or rhyme, but there isn't a single poem out there anyway
The ending in my humble opinion is the best part |
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Re: Anywhere
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:51:31 PM AEST
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*perfect poem
sry |
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Re: Anywhere
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:36:05 PM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: Anywhere
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by goodandevil on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:18:57 PM AEST
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| I can relate to your poem, sometimes i feel trapped where i am and i just want to leave and travel and explore...great poem |
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Re: Anywhere
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by shaba_11 on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 08:07:07 AM AEST
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| Nice write. keep it up. |
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Re: Anywhere
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by MarcRob on
Tuesday, 3rd October 2006 @ 09:47:49 AM AEST
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| I feel the same way.. good write |
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Re: Anywhere
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by one-curly-fry on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 02:22:59 AM AEST
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Australia's another sunny place - you should add that to your list! It's beautiful done here - just keep away from Adelaide! I've been in Adelaide for 13 years and so can't wait to be anywhere else!
Very clever poem and the rhyme!
- Tim |
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