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Take my Dad to Paradise
Contributed by
alasdaircairns
on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:22:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As step by step he slips away,
He wishes it was another day,
Of when he took his wee boy to play,
On golden sandpits come what may.
As loving kin hold him close,
He wonders what he'll miss the most,
Who made him, and where will he go,
Will his mother's greeting know?
As month by month I see him die,
To talk to him is hard, I try,
My heart's infused with fear laced blood,
And cold denial and coward's mud.
So all youse up there, who you may be?
Please take good care of my daddy,
Give him heaven all things nice,
Please take him off to paradise.
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alasdaircairns
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2006-10-02 10:22:54]
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Re: Take my Dad to Paradise
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:39:37 AM AEST
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loved this line:
My heart's infused with fear laced blood,
And cold denial and coward's mud....wonderful tribute to your dad..sad, but beautiful. |
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Re: Take my Dad to Paradise
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by Tabo on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:06:40 PM AEST
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| truely beautiful. |
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Re: Take my Dad to Paradise
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by ham323 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:34:47 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really touching.
Almost brought to tears.
Almost.
This is a wonderful poem.
Your feelings are expressed beautifully.
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