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Back In The Field Now
Contributed by
JockPhillips
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Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:16:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Actually across the field looking back at it
At the fringe of forest mountain base
A river stream runs there making a noise that is nice
Good just surrounds that field and it's apparent in this location as well
Sounds here are good and the field is close and the mountain backdrop is too
The stream runs and light makes it through the trees sometimes and sometimes the top of the mountain backdrop is visible
Sometimes people are there and life is always happening too and usually good as well
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Re: Back In The Field Now
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:19:21 AM AEST
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Hey Jock Phillips. This was a nice little write. I was picturing it well in my mind's eye. I think I'd like to check that field out sometime, sounds magical.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Back In The Field Now
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by alasdaircairns on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 10:24:34 AM AEST
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| Just don't go changing Jock, don't go changing. Very nice and other good stuff. |
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Re: Back In The Field Now
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by ever1der on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 11:02:15 AM AEST
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| I felt cool and refreshed after reading this..and could feel and breathe the mountain air..seeing wild flowers in my minds eye. thanks. |
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Re: Back In The Field Now
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by brew on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 09:37:31 AM AEST
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Well feeling what is presented, was the case. Yes, in an open field, nothing around , except for nature. You take a deep breath, and what is felt.........aweeeeee....
Good write.
Brew~ |
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