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So this is my heart...look at what you've done
Contributed by
sour_gurl67
on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 12:55:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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So small
yet so fragile
it's ready to break
at the slightest mistake
she's carful not to make
So blackend
So hard
it's not as hard as she thinks
her memories sink
into the middle and she bleeds
So real
she wishes she couldn't feel
not an ounce of the pain
not a bit of the shame
she's wearing in vein
So scared
yet so willing
so much hatred inside
but the love that she hides
gets the best of her most of the time
So empty
So lonely
She'll sit alone, her eyes dry
not a tear does she cry
he left, she pretends she forgot why...
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2006-10-02 00:55:24]
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Re: So this is my heart...look at what you've done
(User Rating: 1 )
by The_Unknown on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 03:30:58 AM AEST
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good write.
...I know how u feel. |
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Re: So this is my heart...look at what you've done
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by matt82583 on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:38:08 PM AEST
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| This really is a good poem. Alot of people say they can relate to some. But I really do feel that about this one. Im in the same shoes as this. Keep up the good work. |
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