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Take Me Away
Contributed by
punkhead13
on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 09:48:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It feels like every time I turn around
there you are
and even though it's getting close to closing time
let's forget
our regrets
don't think about, don't worry
because our time is now
I remeber back in the day
we'd play cards
our own way
we'd run around
all over school
and watch our life slip away
becuse even though
we may not belong
we stood up
against what is wrong
these words they faid away
Copyright ©
punkhead13
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2006-10-01 21:48:22]
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Re: Take Me Away
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:02:43 PM AEST
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A couple spelling errors, but the write had great meaning. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:15:58 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Take Me Away
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 11:15:03 PM AEST
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good poem I liked reading it
i took my time to read it
and enjoyed
but you need to take a little time to go over it and check for mispellings its to good to have simple mistakes
please dont take offence just a little friendly advice
you keep writing and i will read |
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