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Break-Down
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 11:53:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Can I make a wish?
My wish is this -
Before the end...
Just one more kiss?
On the inside
It all makes sense
The outside...
I'm a mess.
True love-
What a lie.
I love liars best...
Let's touch the sky.
This sounds so lame
But what else can I say?
I love you...
Everyday
Will you pick me up?
When I'm done with my descent
Will you help me...
And figure out what I meant?
This hasn't worked so far
Will it change...
Or will I adapt...?
I find it all strange
Nothing makes any sense!
Will you help me figure it out?
Or will you watch,
While I find what life's all about?
I want to stop dying, on the inside
Stop crashing
I wanna stop crying myself to sleep, at night
Stop the pieces from smashing...
This is my break-down...
How can I stop this from going around, again?
The inevitable - always happens, always will.
I'm so unstable.
This is
My...
Break- Down
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2006-10-01 11:53:38]
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Re: Break-Down
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 12:34:18 PM AEST
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Ah and our "breakdowns" can become beautiful writes, full of meaning. Our breakdowns also make it possible to start to build again. I quite enjoyed your write. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Break-Down
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by Lilbabe on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 06:49:15 PM AEST
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| i think this was really good. i liked it. seems like the poem of my life. haha. but seriously, i like it alot. |
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