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The Hymn
Contributed by
Blu
on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 10:58:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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He starts-
one movement
like the coming of night.
Too much like
familiar etchings
in colors or stone-
giants standing sentry
to this darkness.
To try, no
say attempt
or fail
at this jocund death.
Whence came this traveler?
From the sea (or the womb)
from that lavender field
sewn in opposition.
It whispers
softly, verily-
say with intent.
That shadowed lover-
too often moving-
he stands-no, say defies
that chorus-and sings with them, or him
(as it were)
and moves
softly, with the coming of night.
He starts, verily,
and moves often
as men are wont to do.
Moves, yes, say moves
softly, verily,
like the coming of night.
Copyright ©
Blu
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2006-10-01 10:58:22]
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Re: The Hymn
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by Kayan on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 01:52:18 PM AEST
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Lovely and amazing.
There is true feeling in this. Once again you have astounded with your ability to move "softly, verily" with words.
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Re: The Hymn
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 03:29:01 PM AEST
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The lyrics is simply beauitful..Smooth and touching...
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