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SHUT CHURCH DOORS
Contributed by
poewhit
on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 08:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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SHUT-CLOSED-no visitors allowed.
Out side the wayward crowd.
Stolen money from the offering.
SMUT-MURDER-GOLDEN CALF CLOWN.
Sits on the table at home.
My new church T.V. of ROME.
Calling with SATANS laws.
ROB,STEAL,Make a fast deal.
ABORTION lines getting the feel.
Onward it goes-- dead babies squeel.
GOLDEN CALF I WORSHIP YOU.
Whats going on in the pew.
People are getting few.
Watch T.V.-Movies forget the church.
New T.V. laws- the rest forsake.
QUARTERBACK just got the secret clue.
[[[ 50 yard pass went over the pew]]].
Copyright ©
poewhit
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2006-10-01 08:18:30]
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Re: SHUT CHURCH DOORS
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 08:41:00 AM AEST
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| I love that satirical line at the end.... our culture is permeating the church too much, not the other way around... nicely written. |
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Re: SHUT CHURCH DOORS
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 23rd October 2006 @ 09:45:19 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the play within the play on words it made me snort and chortle. Please substitue one pew for jew as I'm not jewish really I play one universally.
Peace
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