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What lies Within ( My inner self)
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 05:26:08 AM in AEST
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My space is large, with many doors,
Winding staircase and many floors,
Locks are plenty , but no keys,
Its called my inner self you see,
My prospects are so undecided,
As I have often to others confided,
But they can never see it clear,
My fragile self I hide in here,
My thoughts they are no open book,
You will never see or take a look,
For they are held in this fragile heart,
That grief and pain once tore apart,
My memories are mine to keep,
Locked away in my mind so deep,
I treasure them for they are me,
They show how good life used to be,
So my space is just a comfort zone,
Trapped inside , on my own,
Its how I want my life to be,
For I can't be hurt that way you see,
My future I have not determined yet,
I am taking only the smallest steps,
For what lies ahead I do not know,
But one day my confidence it may grow,
So my space is still where I belong,
Lifes journey hard and very long,
One day I might just learn to fly,
Till then don't ask for reasons why,
For I am just a chrysallis,
My true self is locked inside,
One day I may just be set free,
And become a butterfly.
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Re: What lies Within ( My inner self)
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 07:13:33 PM AEST
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..of a very beautiful, though guarded, persuassion Sue.. though, I wonder a bit about the many commas-
All in all, a fine post~
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Re: What lies Within ( My inner self)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:11:20 PM AEST
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a very beautiful thought sue .. and let me just say, my
friend, you will instinctively know when the time is
right for you to set yourself free. (Some of us are
already butterflies, though we know it not)
Wonderful write.
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Re: What lies Within ( My inner self)
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 07:47:03 PM AEST
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Sue~
A most beautiful thought my dear friend.
You are a wonderful person, who is such a kind, caring and loving soul. May your colours shine radiantly from your beautiful heart my friend. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Take care.
love, hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: What lies Within ( My inner self)
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 5th October 2006 @ 03:36:26 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful piece..Sad in away,but never the less very good...
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