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Ghost Wind
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 12:14:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I am so very tired
of trying to find a way
the pain always remains,
as I stagger into tomorrow
I often fall
deep into sorrow
I never seem to know what's really going on,
when I walk I stumble
when I talk I mumble
it is oh so very frustrating.
I seem to remember
there was something
to believe in
like laughing and talking
and breathing,
once upon a time
love was all that mattered
and a circle of friends
that I experienced
as we slowly cracked and shattered.
In silence
I fade
my footsteps echo down the hall
as shadows dance
on the walls,
there's a hole in my soul
my life is a disaster
the damage is done...
I'm just a ghost now
eerily
you feel me
as I am fading,
and the sensations on my frustrations.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-10-01 00:14:02]
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Re: Ghost Wind
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 06:55:42 PM AEST
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It's so painstaking and sad to read about another fellow poets emotional battle. Through your words I felt such pain and hurt.
You have openly expressed yourself so well. It helps us to heal when we write about what troubles us in our lives. I wish your heart healing. The very best of wishes to you~
hugs n prayers,
dreamer
PS thanx so much for the kind comment you left for me on my poem. Deeply appreciated as always :-) |
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Re: Ghost Wind
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 07:38:11 PM AEST
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hey Tony,
I too am your fan!
I think we all have these thoughts, times, emotions from time to time. U just know how to exspress them so well.
Ya know, I still luv ya,
emy
yo #1 fan |
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