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Father
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 07:13:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Father,
I hate you,
I hate you so much,
It hurts inside.
Nothing I ever did was good enough,
Never good enough,
For you.
You hit me,
You abused me,
You broke my spirit.
You are a sadistic son of a.....
And for that,
I hate you.
I HATE YOU!
You are not my Father,
You just created me,
Thats all you are to me.
Through the years,
You "raised" me,
With your fists,
With your words.
No More.
I'm Done.
I am a Bigger Man than you,
I am a Better Man than you,
I've taken my Beatings from You.
I held back my Tears,
For I would not give you that Satisfaction.
You are no longer in my life,
And I want it that way.
I live my own,
Live my own Way
And have my own Life.
Good-bye Father,
Never talk to me again,
Never call me again,
Never see me again,
Don't even THINK about me again.
I am done with you.
Good-bye "Father"
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-09-30 19:13:37]
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Re: Father
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 07:33:18 PM AEST
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I can't comprehend your pain but I can see that u've taken charge of your life.
The loss is his I'm sure.
Keep the faith and hang tuff.
Sounds like have a great funture in front of you with your writing.
Well done.
huggs,
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Re: Father
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 10:51:45 PM AEST
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| I have relative feelings for my maternal grandfather. I really take this one to heart. Great write! |
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Re: Father
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 14th October 2006 @ 03:05:35 AM AEST
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| Way to take charge of your life and cut the negativity out of it. Keep up the good work. |
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