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Early Morning Blues
Contributed by
honey56
on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 06:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Early morning blues quickly consume
Me..
Without warning
It feels my heart
It feels my spirit
With broken dreams
Capturing my mind in a
World
Without reason, without
A word that causes the
Sun to shine..
Blinded eyes, I could not
See..
A broken spirit to wander
Into the darken shadows
Without a destination..
Copyright ©
honey56
... [
2006-09-30 18:51:00]
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Re: Early Morning Blues
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by emystar on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 10:20:33 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Early Morning Blues
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 10:52:42 PM AEST
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| So deeply feel this one. |
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Re: Early Morning Blues
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 1st October 2006 @ 05:40:41 PM AEST
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when you said "feels" did you mean fills? It was a lovely poem in either case.
mary |
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Re: Early Morning Blues
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 06:01:00 PM AEST
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"A broken spirit to wander
Into the darken shadows
Without a destination"
torturous, those lines ...
there are some very fine elements in this piece. It
is stirringly sad and emotive. (Mornings can be blue
can't they? But I find the night demons far worse ~)
~Breezy |
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Re: Early Morning Blues
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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nice poem i like the style in whice you use
you keep on writing |
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