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Sunshine
Contributed by
somnium
on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 05:50:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Hard head
Deep night
Fast car
Takes flight
Young man
Strong drink
Young girl
Short think
Brakes fail
Car skids
Front page
Bad kids
Don't call
I'm good
She called
I should
Three rings
Picks up
Bangs down
Tea cup
I cry
She screams
I fall
She dreams
No more
Can take
Your heart
To break
When that
Car crashed
My soul
Left smashed
Now down
I'll lie
Kill pain
I'll die
Please come
Save me
I drown
Can't see
Cold grief
Clouds round
Mouth clasped
No sound
Your hand
Takes mine
Lifts me
Sunshine
Copyright ©
somnium
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2006-09-30 05:50:23]
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Re: Sunshine
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 09:03:05 AM AEST
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| Awesome write! |
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Re: Sunshine
(User Rating: 1 )
by aloneinthememory on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 02:14:49 PM AEST
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| Very good. It makes a big impact without using a lot of words. I love it. |
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