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for her to live again
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 01:56:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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She left me lying on the floor there
Praying
And just hoping
She’ll come back to me
She left me broken by the door there
Crying
And just dieing
Inside
But does she even know I love her
With every bit
Every piece of my heart
Does she even know
I miss her
And I try32
But she’s always in mind
I just wish that she would love me
Maybe hold me for tonight
I just wish I wouldn’t cry anymore
And I wish that she’d come back to life
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Shattered_soul
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2006-09-30 01:56:57]
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Re: for her to live again
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 02:20:01 AM AEST
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Incredible writing. One can feel your heart-n-soul.
hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: for her to live again
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 05:52:19 AM AEST
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Awsome write. I could really feel this one.
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