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Our Lives Begin
Contributed by
vonniemc
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Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 01:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The day we met not so long ago,
To me was the best day so,
You came into my world,
Then my life became unfurled.
I saw you on that day,
I felt my heart beat fast away,
I don't know why I felt that scared,
Looking at you I know you cared.
I looked into your eyes,
And soon began to realize,
You were the one for me,
It didn't take me long to see.
We've planned to share so much my dear,
Together for many a long year,
Our lives will soon begin,
Happiness and joy deep within.
Copyright ©
vonniemc
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2006-09-29 13:25:41]
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Re: Our Lives Begin
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:24:27 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. good luck with your love.. i can relate to this.. i feel the same about my bf hes the greatest and i love him.
JENNI |
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Re: Our Lives Begin
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by JockPhillips on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:44:27 PM AEST
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| A good and personal poem with feelings that are strong. Keep up the good. Keep up. |
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Re: Our Lives Begin
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 02:43:17 PM AEST
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nice love poem here too
you just keep on writing i will be reading more |
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