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Thoughts whisper
Contributed by
shaba_11
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Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:55:08 AM in AEST
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When life whispers quietly….
Let loose your dreams.
When the wind stops to breath,
Have the guts to scream.
Is it the world….?
Is it just….
Standing alone in the misty darkness.
Never ending is the long black path.
Heating my head….
Is the big round gold.
Is it the world….?
Is it just….
Here I am. Alone.
The boots never rubbed,
The books untouched.
Is it the world….?
Is it just….
I am the king… I am free.
Live in the blue palace
A throne of tree,
Water of the lake and stony meal.
Is it the world….?
I think it is….
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Re: Thoughts whisper
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by spencer on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 09:09:46 AM AEST
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| This is a fantastic piece of work, I love your writing style |
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Re: Thoughts whisper
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 02:51:10 PM AEST
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a tree palace sounds nice
great writing and different too
I like the way this poem was done very creative |
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