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When
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 11:39:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My mind wanders back to a time less urgent…
Where your eyes met mine and love was present…
I took a knee and announced my love to you…
Cupid shot his arrow and my heart it went through…
I heard your heartbeat with mine…
Back then all was certainly fine…
Where the problems of the day mattered little…
Our love was warm our passion was fertile…
I knew back then you were my only…
You touched my hand so kindly…
I held you in my arms so tight…
Making the moment feel so right…
When the moonlight shined in your eyes…
I felt like a kid who got a birthday surprise…
You were my darling ecstasy…
The one that was meant for me…
I can remember these things so well…
I to you can truly tell…
I remember them now…
And you might ask how…
Because they happened a few seconds ago…
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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2006-09-28 23:39:27]
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Re: When
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 12:09:30 AM AEST
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Bill, I love the picture. LOL This is so tender. Another wonderful love write. These make me smile. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: When
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by emystar on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 12:57:55 AM AEST
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Now this is just down right beautifull and cute at the same time.
Awesome!
huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: When
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by ever1der on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 02:49:47 PM AEST
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| awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
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Re: When
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by jerseysue on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 03:02:47 PM AEST
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| Lovely wrote Bill, so full of expression.And so full of emotion and feeling. I enjoyed reading it very much. It is beautiful. Sue x :-) |
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Re: When
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:01:52 PM AEST
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~*Bill*~
A most beautiful write filled with tender loving emotions. Your poem brought a smile to my face and warmed my heart. A beautiful love like this is shared by a few. Ascribed with deep loving affection. Thanks for posting this dearest Bill~
take care my friend.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: When
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 08:21:59 AM AEST
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awwwwwwww adorable, I sure like this side of you in your poetry as well, you and your wife are very lucky
~Michelle~ |
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Re: When
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by trueecho on
Saturday, 25th November 2006 @ 12:12:03 PM AEST
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very nicely written..attrated to the author..
:)
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