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Cherish
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 05:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I feel you deep down in my heart…
Like when the time our love did start…
Oh you make feel anew…
Violet’s beauty has nothing on you…
Eternal Joy you have given me…
Your undying devotion brings out the kid in me…
Over the rainbow and to the end…
Unending passion I can say…
Makes me feel this way…
Yearning for your soft touch…
Doesn’t break my soul to much…
A little time must past to know…
Running back to you I go…
Lovers entwined in passions game…
I feel like screaming out your name…
Never stopping, never ending…
Girl to you my love I’m sending…
I cherish you my Darling
Copyright ©
oneir8dude
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2006-09-28 17:02:38]
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Re: Cherish
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:00:45 PM AEST
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Bill~
A passionate and most romantic write you have beautifully ascribed for us to read and enjoy. A lucky lady for whom these words are beautifully written for. Wishing you a lifetime of joy and happiness together. Thanks for posting it. Take care my friend.
*hugs n prayers*
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Re: Cherish
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:13:41 PM AEST
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Bill, WOW ya big sweetie heart you. How romantic are you??? LOL I bet your lovely wife smiled broadly when she read this little piece. Big guy with a soft heart....gotta love it. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Cherish
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 07:12:21 PM AEST
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Yay! I know what the secret is! ;)
This is lovely, Bill. I do hope your wife loves this as much as we all do (eh Laura? ;) )
I like the hidden bit, some of these things are so easy to see, but this is very subtle, the poem pulls the focus away.
Great write my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Cherish
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 10:09:38 PM AEST
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Well sir, this is a wonderful dedication to your soul mate. I am sure that she will be swiped off her feet when she reads this. The love and kindness you share in your writings reflects the type of man you are. May peace and joy continue to fill your heart.
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Re: Cherish
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 08:11:37 AM AEST
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Loving write indeed. You cover the romance scene beautiful!
~Michelle~ |
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