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Tired Eyes
Contributed by
DannyGirl
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 03:44:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tired eyes feel heavy and aged
My head is pounding my brains disengaged
Tired eyes have seen so much pain
Life is too short and I lived it in vain
Tired eyes open and shut
A tear to the ground my stomachs in knots
Tired eyes please let me be
To sleep one last time before God sets me free
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DannyGirl
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2006-09-28 15:44:25]
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Re: Tired Eyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by catz77 on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 06:29:59 PM AEST
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i liked this poem
my eyes often tire
good write
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Re: Tired Eyes
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by Honey56 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 09:12:38 AM AEST
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Nice poem..Lots of emotion moving around there..
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Re: Tired Eyes
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by spencer on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 04:21:30 AM AEST
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| This is an absolute master piece! |
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