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Schizophrenia
Contributed by
zealousnatalie
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 03:18:09 PM in AEST
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See me smile, see me cry. I see myself in your face.
I hear your voice, I know your thoughts. I hear you screaming from pain.
See me love, see me hate. I love to hate this place.
Let me down, as I look up. You cry, but tears roll down my face.
Who is who when there are two. I see my self inside of you.
Are you me or am I you? Is there one or two?
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 05:50:31 PM AEST
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My cousin has this illness and it's so sad to see what she has been through.
It's true when they say so little words can say so much. You have done a fine job with this write. Thanks for posting it.
hugs n prayers,
Sue M |
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by poewhit on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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I was in VIET NAM and became schizoid from fear and the terror of war. Everything was a booby trap. Every step was a land mine.Every soda was laced,etc,etc.
After almost 40 years I still have those delusions at time, though I have insights to the condition. Today roadside bombs walking down the street. Garbage cans boxes,etc,etc,etc, |
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 10:09:05 PM AEST
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Wow...This is very well-written.
"Let me down, as I look up. You cry, but tears roll down my face. "
Great, great work. |
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