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Waiting On A Rainbow
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 07:31:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Waiting on a rainbow,
Lost within a dream,
Empty streets and empty halls,
Full of whispered screams,
Anguished in the daylight,
As shadows softly fall,
Wondering if I gave too much,
Or not enough at all,
Thinking of the night time,
When the darkness grows,
The spilling of my scarlet blood;
Redder than the rose,
Hope seeps in from somewhere,
An ever-guiding beam,
Whilst I’m waiting on my rainbow,
And lost within my dream.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-09-28 07:31:31]
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Re: Waiting On A Rainbow
(User Rating: 1 )
by Oneir8dude on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 08:05:18 AM AEST
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Well Tuesday! It's about time... Taking a Sabbatical
or what? Don't do that to me ever again...
Of course I liked it not only liked it I loved it...
"Whilst I’m waiting on my rainbow,
And lost within my dream."
Maybe the rainbow comes in your dreams...
I bet you gave more than enough :)
I liked the flow... Didn't get hung up once and the
meaning behind this, I got was one of waiting for
a love that never came... I loves it Tuesday
Don't make me wait as long next time :D
You are AWSOME!
Thank You
Bill |
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Re: Waiting On A Rainbow
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 11:22:56 AM AEST
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Well worth the wait. What a wonderful write. The poetic flow lovely.
"Empty streets and empty halls,
Full of whispered screams"
I loved that line. Thank you for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Waiting On A Rainbow
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by spencer on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 07:19:30 AM AEST
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| i do like it |
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