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My life given back
Contributed by
vonniemc
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Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 04:20:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Three years have gone,
Since I found myself alone,
I thought my heart would break,
As my confidence you did take.
So I know I feel better,
Since the day I wrote you that letter,
I told you how bad you'd been,
And I hoped all your faults were seen.
I know you think you do no wrong,
But deep inside you knew all along,
Still now you really try,
Somedays to make me cry.
I feel like a person again,
Cos now I'm free from pain.
And everyday I see the sun,
As I know my life has again begun.
My days are no more blue,
Perhaps I was afraid from you,
You did so much to me,
But now I know I am free.
I thank you for going away,
So now I can have my say,
I thank you from my heart,
The day you left and my life did restart
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Re: My life given back
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th September 2006 @ 05:44:25 AM AEST
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Amasterpeice.
I can tottaly relate. I said I'd sit alone the rest of my rather have someone try-n-change me.
keep on the upside friend.
huggs,
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Re: My life given back
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by ammar on
Friday, 29th September 2006 @ 05:57:02 AM AEST
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Beautifully written.
It is always right to give your life a new meaning. It's good that you decided to get on with your life rather than crying for someone who is perhaps not your worth.
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Re: My life given back
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 02:45:29 PM AEST
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wow deep poem i love it
i can relate to this in so many ways
five shining stars for you
keep on penning |
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