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Earthly Angel
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 01:14:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Earthly Angel
~
In my life,
I have dated many women.
But only loved just a few.
Most of which are of my past,
With the prime exception of you.
~
In my life,
I have experienced much,
Had to learn from mistakes.
I’ve had to sort through the many,
To discard of the fakes.
~
In my life,
I choose wisely,
For my searching days are through.
A gift I was given,
When I first laid eyes on you.
~
In my life,
I’ve known happiness,
Contentment and true love.
I’ve convinced that Angels live,
On earth, not just above.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2006-09-27 13:14:01]
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Re: Earthly Angel
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by Amicus on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 08:07:58 PM AEST
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I think it was great but the 2 paragraph last line was odd maybe instead of the word " of " you could have all. That is my personal opinion but it ended very well
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Re: Earthly Angel
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by Winterland on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 01:51:12 PM AEST
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Jeff, I think this is beautiful poem with a lovely message. Your special woman is a very lucky one indeed.
Jennifer |
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