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You may be a rose but I am a PHEONIX
Contributed by
midian
on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 06:55:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hard and fast the news sinks in
How much i've changed i can only begin
To pick up the pieces
Shattered as they are
Tormented,
I watch my life from afar.
Will i remain a passenger
or will i take the wheel?
look at the state of me now
Its so hurtfully real!
The rose you are,
you ridicule me!
but even a rose will wither
Just like me you'll see.
believe what you like
and say whatever about me
Because i am a pheonix
I Can rise again you see
so when your time has gone,
And you have moved on.
I will rise out of the ashes
And be beautifal Again
Copyright ©
midian
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2006-09-27 06:55:01]
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Re: You may be a rose but I am a PHEONIX
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 07:55:44 AM AEST
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This is very well write and a wonderful poem. You can read it yourself everyday in order to help you think positive about yourself. May you come to find peace and joy in your heart.
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Re: You may be a rose but I am a PHEONIX
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by Alison on
Wednesday, 27th September 2006 @ 02:33:51 PM AEST
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| awesome!!! i dont want to be a rose that fades and dies! i want to be something stronger and better! keep it up!! great write! |
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Re: You may be a rose but I am a PHEONIX
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by Faust on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 10:59:10 PM AEST
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Very true but know that a phoenix is one of the most pursued song birds whose tears can heal. They also are believed to guard great treasures. Remember that.
Eternally Punished,
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Re: You may be a rose but I am a PHEONIX
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by SocialMisfit on
Friday, 3rd November 2006 @ 02:01:09 AM AEST
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*claps*, i dont think i need to say anything, you have said enough, and to mar this masterpiece with my own words would be a disgrace, wondefull write, definatly one i shall read again.
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