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rainny day's on the beach
Contributed by
bennie
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:30:00 PM in AEST
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standing here waching the rain drop's dance upon the dark still water. the sun setting down over the babe blue ocen,
the light yellow sand with foot print's leading up to the back light house door, then getting washed away by the cold rain that fall's on my face as i stand here waiting for you to take me away.
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2006-09-26 20:30:00]
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Re: rainny day's on the beach
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 11:31:31 PM AEST
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Very beautifull scenary.
Huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: rainny day's on the beach
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th March 2009 @ 08:43:59 PM AEST
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| The imagery might be slightly more powerful if you had bothered to so much as proofread this or utilize the shift key ... |
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