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One More Reason
Contributed by
romance_pyro
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Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:05:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One More Reason
I Wish I could end my life
One more reason to end it all
My life as I never belived it would be
How could I crumble so fragile
Now alchol is my best friend
When I was so close to Quiting
No blood runs down my arms again
And the pain...It feels great
Like a lost friend missed so much
Pain is a friend that will never turn me down
Now I hate all and I just want it to end
But ill be better one day
When I get away and lose myself
And one day be at peace
With all that happens my life is just another reason
To die and never love again
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2006-09-26 20:05:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: One More Reason
(User Rating: 1 ) by CaptainSpaldo05 on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 08:23:06 PM AEST (User
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I'm a huge fan of free flow structure...
But you gotta find peace in life before you find your peace with death. :) |
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Re: One More Reason
(User Rating: 1 ) by crazy on
Sunday, 8th October 2006 @ 06:34:43 PM AEST (User
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so sad and yet it just feel empty.take away the words to see the emotion behind it and what do you see?hopelessness,regret, hate for the world and everyone in it?
no balence at all its what we all live and seek to find.good poem |
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Re: One More Reason
(User Rating: 1 ) by skibblez on
Saturday, 17th March 2007 @ 04:23:21 PM AEST (User
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it waz good but i hope in tha future you can find sumtin better to write about bcuz i kno form first hand experience that pain nor death iz tha answer to ur problems it only makes thingz worse even though you might not kno it people care for you and you have to realize that carving and drinkin neither make ur problems go away like they say tha glass may be half empty but itz still have full and nomatter wut you have to drink it you have one life live it to tha fullest i kno thingz can get hard but you have to make it through and kno that everyone iz here for you alot of people might try to hurt you but thers also alot of people here to help you maybe you shuld try to seek help keep ur head upp |
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